It was a good read. Excellent interactive-fiction gamebook. Lots of potential.
Your storytelling could use a little work, though... not enough depth, in my honest opinion. Also, the storyline was too short! You should make it longer, last for a few hours in the very least!
This story has so much potential and anyone who's played this game(book) so far will probably share my misery in inhabiting the metaphorical boat (or spaceship) called "Left Hanging".
University brief to fit the story shackled me to me a 10-minute-or-so read, which is why it's a little short. I went big with ambition at the beginning and had to bottleneck it toward the end.
There could very well be a sequel if I get the time and/or inspiration to write it! I love science fiction to it's core, and love writing within that realm, so hopefully!
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It was a good read. Excellent interactive-fiction gamebook. Lots of potential.
Your storytelling could use a little work, though... not enough depth, in my honest opinion. Also, the storyline was too short! You should make it longer, last for a few hours in the very least!
This story has so much potential and anyone who's played this game(book) so far will probably share my misery in inhabiting the metaphorical boat (or spaceship) called "Left Hanging".
So... will there be a sequel?
Hey, thanks for being the first to take notice!
University brief to fit the story shackled me to me a 10-minute-or-so read, which is why it's a little short. I went big with ambition at the beginning and had to bottleneck it toward the end.
There could very well be a sequel if I get the time and/or inspiration to write it! I love science fiction to it's core, and love writing within that realm, so hopefully!